Now that I see it in print, I can think of ways it could be made to look better. But for a first attempt, it's not bad.
Anyway, I only need one copy of the magazine. If you'd like my spare copy, give me a yell and I'll bring it along to the next slatch. We should probably have another slatch soon, yes? Except that my Mum's about to have heart surgery and I'll probably be spending most of my weekends down Geelong way during the next month.